ALL ALONE

I can't feel anything 

no happiness,no regret nothing

all i can see is a shadow of my self 

it staires at me like the lady at louvre

chills run down my spine

i feel lonliness 

ALL ALONE  i sit wondering dreaming

going on about the yesteryears glories

only motionless things remain here,

beautiful from the exterior but now 

they seem sick of their unceasing existence

i walk towards that broken window

look on to that empty street

hardly i see anyone these days

oh will this ever end this long lasting soul wandering

ever will it end

i see that street petrified of what that day will bring 

this wait , terrible mysterious wait!

when will there be respite?

respite! i beg you bring me respite

the grave seems to be a cradle of the dead

man lies there, sleeping evermore!

when will death graciously accept the invitation

oh strike mighty warrior let me peacefully lie

in the cold earth

burried forever , let me leave this place peacefully

unafraid let me be! ALL ALONE! in harmony.......

Reviews

[AAHELI]

i was in a depressed state when i wrote this but i still think that every grey cloud has a silver lining! :)

[Dushyant Thadani]

I found this poem filled with emotions, deep scary emotions. Great job.

[Carolene]

very sad if's hard to think about...

[Valandil93]

Wow, very emotional but it doesn't come off as melodramatic. Well done. I really liked the images that the poem described. Well done.

[whispereversolightly]

sad write really. There is always hope for everyone. Well expressed