Silence

Giving up on your inner impulse!
Letting the word you would have said in the silent.
Feels like biting up your teeth.
Chewing them.
As you sense the rigid particles with your tongue.
And hear the cracking sounds.
Going on swallowing and saying:
«I am not hungry, I just ate!»

Reviews

[Twilight]

Don't you dare give up lol.! Writing helps to sustain some stability for one's mood, and silence can be essential; when writing a piece - which seems particularly important to us. Otherwise, the external worldly noises; can damage one's concentration.

Indeed, Dario Argento (famous in the world of cinema for directing horror and thriller movies); has been known to shut himself away in a darkened room When he is wanting, sufficient silence from the world outside; in order to run through new story ideas and narratives in his mind..But, of course; such deliberate isolation is perhaps somewhat extreme. And, it's normally best; to do whatever works for us...

[Poetic Beauty]

Keeping our tongues silent is easier than keeping our thoughts quiet. Often there is a debate or convey within our own minds and we often tell ourselves many things.

I’m a lover of food and cooking so I often think I’m hungry and then have to be like no you are not. I’m trying to learn to portion control. Growls but I will get there.

I like the realistic thought and voice in this poem and the uniqueness that is written in this poem.

[a_methyste]

Thank you dear I appreciste your words.

[Poetic Beauty]

You are most welcome