Flower affair

have noticed, my flower has an affair!
She stretches out and reaches towards light, every day.
Uninterrupted every hour, every minute, every second.
She is secure.
She knows what she wants.
She flirts, stretches,
Opens up as penetrated.
She does not care, whether there are people in the room.
She likes eccentric public shows.

Reviews

[Twilight]

I had read this once, but only just around to typing up my observations and thoughts.

It's briefer than many of your ones, but also with clearer meanings and metaphors. Indeed, sometimes "less is more"; as they say.

A vey positive line, refers to "reaching towards light every day"; reminding me of someone seeking for the positives? Or, reaching out to grasp inspiration to be creative; even?

The flower can be used to represent womanhood. And, the crude expression of a woman being "de-flowered" implies losing her virginity. But, I digress.

This lovely piece, also brought a brazen woman to mind; who really does not care about what onlookers might think. Possibly, even an exhibitionist of some sort?

A woman, as described in this poem; is nice for me to think about.

Thankyou.

[a_methyste]

Thank you for taking time and reading it and for your descriptions. They added to this poem.

[Twilight]

Thanks. All good to know, darling friend.