Because, because, because..

Because, Because, Because…. Because it acted like gravity. It attracted my eyes. It invaded my head. Maps full of buds, as on thoughts. Because it took me physically, As on confession? Waterfall-Vowe

Because it acted like gravity.
It attracted my eyes.
It invaded my head.
Maps full of buds, as on thoughts.
Because it took me physically,
As on confession?
Waterfall-Vowels in action.
Leaf Letters floating.
Horny snapshots as on cyber.
It is as long and as short as that.
Any other is a temporary traveller.
A sight of distant landscape,
Projected on the mirror of the car.
As it moves forward.
The pride of life.

Reviews

[Joli Dy]

"Waterfall-Vowels in action.
Leaf Letters floating." That is a poem within a poem. Delicious on the lips when read aloud.

[a_methyste]

Thank you for the kind words and taking time and reading it.

[Twilight]

This seems difficult to decipher, although I remember you saying in email; that you are not always good with words.

Well, possibly here; your are expressing thoughts over the initial stages of physical attraction? As if, it is initially distant; at first sight only recognised with one glance?

As a car passes fleetingly by, a opportunity for passion can pass by; almost before one has realised that it was there..? Of course, only the writer knows her inspiration for sure

It also perhaps, speaks of how overpowering; unexpected passion can be? Maybe, how you sometimes find it beyond words..?

[a_methyste]

This is about the inspiration and writing experience. )

[Twilight]

I see. It could be interpreted in that way too. Indeed, inspirational ideas for our writing can hit us unexpectedly; and sometimes appear for mere fleeting moments in our minds.