Over

Why do you invite me over
If I am a ghost to you
Dark hairy man.

Reviews

[Vol]

A_methyste,
What a firecracker image! Made this old man laugh out loud for at least one guff maybe even an aw at the end! Novels have been written from such precise, complicated visions. You pale blond woman... (It fits the milieu whether accurate or not, and how Hollywood would cast it). Anyway, very nice write!
Vol

[a_methyste]

Your nice words made my day and put a smile in my face. When it comes to poetry every word counts, imagine then when they are nice. Thank you again.

[Vol]

A_methyst,
Have you seen the movie "What the Bleep do we Know? There is a short scene in there that demonstrates the power of words on a quantu level. It is unexplainable, but amazing.
Vol

[a_methyste]

You are making my day. Sometimes I feel and wonder about these verses. What they mean.

[Vol]

There is something to be said about the depth of these little verses. I enjoy them very much...

[a_methyste]

You are giving me fuel to write for the rest of the year. :) Thanks dear. I love these little things. Without them I would feel a part of me is missing. Hugs dear. Lots of hugs. Thank you another time.

[Vol]

As a retired Creative Writing teacher, let me say, I'm just calling it as I see it...

[a_methyste]

Thank you.