Virgin

There was a girl in the neighbourhood.
She was wearing glasses.
Virgin in all her ways and manners.
But then she met a drug dealer in the corner of the building....

Reviews

[Jibey]

A bit of life... I like it... the girl wearing glasses... an ingenue... vulnerable... deflowered by drugs... hymen and heroine... in the corner of the building... against the wall

[a_methyste]

Yes a bunch of things happened there. And she remembered them all. :)

[JayG]

So, a "girl" of unknown age, in an unknown neighborhood of an unknown city and country "met" someone of unknown gender in a corner of "the" building?

First, how can you refer to a specific building as if the reader has a clue of what you mean?

But that aside...

1. So someone unknown met someone unknown. So what? It's not a story or even an anecdote.
2. The wording is prosaic, not poetic. So, in what way is it a poem?

[a_methyste]

It is a piece of my diary dear, this time metaphorical. I crave diary pieces. :)