Sharp tongue

Sharp tongue

A Poem by a_methyste
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Look at this tongue how it cuts and breaks I can not love my lover tonight Look at this tongue how it cuts and breaks I can not love my lover tonight

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Look at this tongue how it cuts and breaks
I can not love my lover tonight



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wow .. really fine minimalism .. a sharp tongue that cuts and breaks the night .. there is a passage in the Bible that talks about controlling the tongue ... it's like trying to steer a horse without the bit in it's mouth .. but once mastered ... the whole body follows .. or something like that
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


a_methyste

9 Months Ago

Yes, I wish I mastered it. But it is a tough, tough issue. I try to make improvements day by day, bu.. read more
Einstein Noodle

9 Months Ago

it is a difficult thing .. so much during the day is instant and at a fast pace .. easy to be caught.. read more
a_methyste

9 Months Ago

Exactly as you write.
Words can hurt like the cut of a whip
Just as they can heal and soothe the throbbing pain

Posted 10 Months Ago


a_methyste

10 Months Ago

Yes indeed. And how we use them. How careless we are and never think about it. Or we do things with .. read more
Jibey

10 Months Ago

So true - one word can destroy a relationship because it touches the wrong trigger
a_methyste

10 Months Ago

Sometimes words derive from thoughts, and sometimes we just say the carelessly. Both of them are not.. read more

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Added on March 8, 2024
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