11 Am sun

11 am sun 11 am sun like a laughter you steal a glance from the window but get stuck and you do not want to go away it will be a wonderful day just wait and see burning leaves laughing trees

11 am sun like a laughter
you steal a glance from the window
but get stuck and you do not want to go away
it will be a wonderful day
just wait and see

burning leaves
laughing trees

Reviews

[hailey]

I like the base of this. Your central idea is really good. I know exactly what you mean when you explain getting stuck under the sunlight. You can feel the promise of a good day within this poem. This feels very hopeful, quiet, calm...

[a_methyste]

Thank you! Have a great day!