Electric Tailor

those days i often imagined time as a charlatan tailor with a bad taste

Reviews

[g.r.]

good/ I'd call it something that offers stupid hesitant youth with all the time in the world and offers those that might finally make something of their 'seasonings" & no time left.

[a_methyste]

earth is frantic and we live here; i would not manage to tell the whole story in two verses;

[g.r.]

I don't think anyone could/ yes it is a frantic framework we work in. cheers

[Edie Blue Starfish]

love it, but your title sucks

[a_methyste]

thanks, :) i cannot leave it blank so

[Edie Blue Starfish]

you're welcome. :)
why not think of a title?

for example, tailored time :)

but I do know what you mean. I struggle with titles too.

[a_methyste]

I have never written with titles; i would rather leave them blank; poetry is like water and it flows through your fingers;