In Darkness

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Darkness filled the room much like a flood of emptiness.  The room however, wasn’t empty, that darkness that was present within held so much hope.  It wasn’t merely a room with no light because light was in a sense, the enemy; the fear; the revealer of all things.  Here within the shade a person could attempt to live, to love. 

            There was a light knock on the far end of the room.  Tyler’s nerves didn’t jolt or spaz at the noise, but rather became relieved.  The fear in his chest subsided and he began to walk slowly towards the direction of the sound.  His eyes adjusted a bit to the black shadow inside the room, seeing a long counter or desk to his right.  A four-bladed ceiling fan sat dormant above him.

Reviews

[Butterfly_Kid]

This is shaping up to be a very interesting setting. I'm not sure why the font and format change halfway through like that, but I'd say you're off to a good start. let's see where this goes.