Craving You

Craving You

A Poem by Amayrani Franco
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an erotic poem, of sorts.

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I often find myself thinking about it- your lips on my skin: that warmth and moisture that can so easily overtake my whole being (mind, body, and soul) from whichever spot you may command. 
It is at once the most familiar and the most thrillingly unknown sensation; as if I could will it into existence by simply thinking or dreaming it. 
I feel myself blushing at the thought mid-day, as suddenly my knees grow weak at the mere knowledge that out bodies can harmonize so perfectly with one another- matching breath for breath and movement for movement- each contraction and release an uncharted territory that we claim as ours.
And they say that the novelty won't last; but how can this be novel if I've felt it time and time again? How can it be fleeting, when it feels as natural and necessary as breathing? 
With each look from your eyes I melt and with each word that falls from your lips I succumb- always wanting more; always craving you whole. 
One touch is all that it takes to make me shiver and gasp for air; each small touch leaving a searing print so deep within me that it makes my bones shatter and my blood overflow. 
I want you so much I can hardly stand it... I mean to move on, but instead let it consume me- all of me. 
And once again I find myself craving you- all of you. 

© 2013 Amayrani Franco


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Amayrani Franco
My first post... Just something I came up with out of the blue.

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Quite a telling representation of passion and how two people enjoy each other. Gets the blood going for sure and is quite accurate of the sensations. This is my favorite line: "my knees grow weak at the mere knowledge that out bodies can harmonize so perfectly with one another." Such a true description of what that sensation is like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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amazing :)
you done a beautiful work must say :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Word! Just wanted to say that it was passionate, I like poems quickly transpired and inspired on a whim. Nice 'out of the blue' write. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Quite a telling representation of passion and how two people enjoy each other. Gets the blood going for sure and is quite accurate of the sensations. This is my favorite line: "my knees grow weak at the mere knowledge that out bodies can harmonize so perfectly with one another." Such a true description of what that sensation is like.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wouldn't say this is an erotic poem as such; more a sweet and tender ode to the compassion of true souls entwining, recognising their counterpoint in one another :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amayrani Franco

11 Years Ago

There we go! sounds like we're onto something.
I Shred This Cabbage

11 Years Ago

I'd certainly like to be onto something ;)
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oh I love it it's incredible :)
I love the idea of blushing at mid-day ... because of the feelings we get at night ... I really liked a lot of lines in this poem and it was really anxious and I loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Amayrani Franco

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it (:
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I think you did a great job with it.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Amayrani Franco
Amayrani Franco

San DIego, CA



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