Craving You

an erotic poem, of sorts.

I often find myself thinking about it- your lips on my skin: that warmth and moisture that can so easily overtake my whole being (mind, body, and soul) from whichever spot you may command. 

It is at once the most familiar and the most thrillingly unknown sensation; as if I could will it into existence by simply thinking or dreaming it. 

I feel myself blushing at the thought mid-day, as suddenly my knees grow weak at the mere knowledge that out bodies can harmonize so perfectly with one another- matching breath for breath and movement for movement- each contraction and release an uncharted territory that we claim as ours.

And they say that the novelty won't last; but how can this be novel if I've felt it time and time again? How can it be fleeting, when it feels as natural and necessary as breathing? 

With each look from your eyes I melt and with each word that falls from your lips I succumb- always wanting more; always craving you whole. 

One touch is all that it takes to make me shiver and gasp for air; each small touch leaving a searing print so deep within me that it makes my bones shatter and my blood overflow. 

I want you so much I can hardly stand it... I mean to move on, but instead let it consume me- all of me. 

And once again I find myself craving you- all of you. 

Author's Note

My first post... Just something I came up with out of the blue.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Quite a telling representation of passion and how two people enjoy each other. Gets the blood going for sure and is quite accurate of the sensations. This is my favorite line: "my knees grow weak at the mere knowledge that out bodies can harmonize so perfectly with one another." Such a true description of what that sensation is like.

[MAC]

a very honest and sensual poem....me likes!

[Nix]

A ruggedly beautiful emotion stuffed poem. Well written.

[Sami Khalil]

One touch is all that it takes to make me shiver and gasp for air; each small touch leaving a searing print so deep within me that it makes my bones shatter and my blood overflow.

I want you so much I can hardly stand it... I mean to move on, but instead let it consume me- all of me.

[Just Jayren]

This is extreamily clever... It's obvious to feel what the characters feeling and at the same time you get the sense there's more behind the face value of their emotions. You really feel how intoxicating lust can really be, and yeat you protrayed this at the same time writing in a very respectible and tranquil way.... I really like this.

Good job ;)

[MoriartyMesa]

Blurred lines, nice. Not so much as a lyrically wording, but close.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Erotic... of sort... I will have to downplay that to romantic... but all in all the words reflect passion in each line... the end gives the reader to question if this relationship has parted ways:

I want you so much I can hardly stand it... I mean to move on, but instead let it consume me- all of me.
And once again I find myself craving you- all of you.

Like this was a memory stuck in your thoughts... and not wanting to let go... on that moment in time...

[Antoñyo]

A smooth-flowing ride, vivid and powerful.

Thanks for sharing

[BL]

This poem is full of anticipation and yearning and you describe very well the build up to the love you will be having in the near future. It's like you are instinctively revving your engine getting ready for what might be asked of you and nature is then taking its course.

[Relic's Bare Trees]

Your words are something a guy/or girl, would be flattered to hear from a mate. It's passionate and thoughtful at the same time. A romp in the hey wouldn't be out of order after hearing this. Good poem.