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A Poem by Antonio Alonzo
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Sumblimation of a rusty chain.

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Iron-wrought links, plain ellipses
that sweeping course of a planet or the androgynous binary star
Latter link's boomerang swoop, awkward embrace of two links
scoups a rust peck in, penetrates its mistress's omega
An arm's length--this chain is lumped
sized as in one's palm upon paint-spattered newspaper square
A painter's eyes knows the course from wetting of bristles
to reconaissant leer over chain lump
into the recondite pinky promise of the chain
To begin before ending is a fine form of hinging,
he says, final brushstroke

© 2008 Antonio Alonzo


Author's Note

Antonio Alonzo
Please critique the usual: imagery, figurative language, diction, etc. Revision pending.

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Antonio Alonzo
Antonio Alonzo

Slidell, LA



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Born June 15, 1990 at the Ochsner Clinic Foundation in New Orleans. Lived in Mandeville, LA until summer '08—now resides in Slidell, LA. Educated by the St. Tammany Parish school system. Made st.. more..