The Chase

Run away. Don't come back.

Run through the forest.
Please do not look behind you,
Or they might catch you.

Reviews

[Osephyr]

Nice Haiku. I personally find that this form of poetry is much harder to get right and can never seem to find the right words for a haiku. What you have hear is nice because of the scene that the reader imagines just from the three lines that you wrote. Take this for an example:
I kill an ant
and realize my three children
have been watching.
- Kato Shuson
One would suppose that a good haiku would be how much the author can make the reader imagine base only on just those three lines they wrote. This kind of made me what to try my hand at haikus again