Pain

just came out...

Painstaking

Pain hastens

Fastens itself

To pleasant faces

Joy's wasted

Friends misplace it

My pen tastes

...

Tears

...

Reviews

[William Maisonave]

I'm impressed. If you could read a few of my poems and give me your honest opinion I would appreciate it. I respect your work and because of that will respect your opinion. I just ask for brutal honestly...anything less isnt worth the energy it takes to write a review.

[Coyote Poetry]

So few words you said so much. I like the ending. The pen will tell the story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[beautyinbaddness]

thats really actually kind of cool