voices

sudden inspiration not sure why i did this. hope you like it

As i ly down in bed,

my eyes shut tight,

i listen,

listen,

the voices of people,

people all around,

everyone in the streets,

and everyone in the alleys,

i here many things,

happiness,

sorrow,

suffering,

voices of people crying out

so that they can be heard,

voices of people

that want to be heard and known,

but i take a moment,

just one moment

to listen to my own thoughts,

listen to my own voice,

ive never realized it before

everything i wanted,

the choices i should have made,

i shouldn't have listen to others before myself

i regret it

but things have changed

and they should for everyone.

 

Reviews

[-!katie!-]

oooh dave! i like this (: it's really good. well done
good concept.
very well written (:

bravo !

[Moonlit-Blues]

This summarises how I felt a couple of years ago. Like, you want to say something, or do something, but when you realise what you should've done, its far too late. Beautifully conscise, I believe you've definitely captured that feeling, or undecided choice. Sometimes all we want is inner peace, instead of hearing about conflict. I hope you find a balance of inner peace and find it in yourself to forgive, yourself. Beautifully penned!