The best city

Describing or at least try to describe my love for Philadelphia an the south New Jersey seashore

It’s hard for me to put into words my love for the south New Jersey shore an the city of Philadelphia they mean so much to me I’m from Philadelphia an live in south New Jersey I will tell a story about the south New Jersey shore an give a couple of memories about Philadelphia a few memories I have of Philadelphia I rember when my mom got me some medical equipment for my asthma I rember when my sister first told me I was disabled I rember a Phillies baseball hat I rember that it was colorful i rember a time when my neighbor told me that my hair style was bad I rember my dad got the same sweater as I I rember when I first got my drivers liscense when I was 18 I first got my drivers liscense an I went to the beach in south New Jersey an me an my mom know people at the hobie cat beach an it’s a 5 minute walk to the beach maybe a few minutes from where the car is parked there’s some big houses around there an my freind that I know at the beach there was going to let me captain the hobie cat but I forgot my lisecenses

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Reviews

[Samantha Doyle]

I think you could try to make it clearer and some more detail possibly if you remember. Also, if you want a good app to use to correct grammar, spelling, etc. there's an app called Grammarly which constantly helps me out a ton. It even corrected a lot of my grammar while I was writing this review!