Yellow bus

Haiku/Hokku

Yellow bus
Wind moving leaves
Ring class bell

Author's Note

Trying to stick with the traditional style, not the American style.

Reviews

[E.V. Black]

I like the add-in of the leaves. Overall, I do think that it needs something. Still, it's fairly good.

[Wicahpi]

reminds me of my days as a school bus driver ... in fall.
nice