One of the Guys - Part 1

Autobiographical.

We play football after school,

ride in the bed

of your brother’s pickup

and yell at the other cars.

 

I’m one of you,

I blend right in.

You know me.

I know you.

I’m one of the guys.

 

We get in trouble for fighting,

in lunch and gym,

but we forgive each other

in ISS the next day.

 

I fight dirty,

just like you.

You talk smack.

I talk smack.

I’m one of the guys.

 

We hang out at the movies,

R-rated for Blood,

Gore, Sex, Violence

and never get carded.

 

I hate skirts

and frills and lace.

You hate pink.

I hate pink.

I’m one of the guys.

 

We have guys nights out

and I never notice

that I’m the only girl there,

and neither do you.

 

I wear jeans

and hoodies loose.

You date girls.

I don’t date.

I’m one of the guys.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[jumbie's #1 fan]

hey this is good for all the girls that can relate to it. great job

[Alex R.]

Reminds me of high school...interesting pattern.

[Alex Blodgett]

Not bad...I know many women who could relate to this...And Thanks for liking my story. Also commenting on it.

[nightmask]

i love it it reminds me of me lol :) coz most of my friends are guys and i hate girly things :) great job!