moon

We are ignited as one.
For we both look upon the same moon.

Reviews

[Vian]

Humanity. I liked this very much. The world hasn't seemed so simple before. I really do detest questioning word choice because it could just be me. It could be that I don't fully comprehend the poetic use of the word. It makes sense. You said that we are "ignited as one." And we could truly be 'ignited' as you say. Our souls ablaze, the fires consuming all humans at once as we look at the moon. It makes sense. And maybe even if you didn't mean it, I can concede that this it still a beautiful sentiment. However, perhaps you meant 'united'? I really do die a little when questioning a word choice that isn't incorrect and does in fact, avoid a clichéd thought. In whatever case, I am just curious, hopefully not coming off as someone trying to infringe upon your creative space. Forgive me. Thank you for writing.

[a-decaying-soul]

Not at all, infact that was exactly what i wanted to get across. I chose ignited instead of united as i felt it was more suited to portray the union of humanity in a soulful sense. Thank you for your interpretation. :)

[Sam Ryann]

Short and sweet. For such a short poem, it's very meaningful. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing!

100/100

[a-decaying-soul]

Oh my, thank you ever so much, it means a lot :)

[A. Amos]

This was short yet deep meaningful and amazing...

[a-decaying-soul]

Thank you ever so much !! :)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear