The Heart Lies

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You said you loved me, but you showed me your hatred side
You said you cared for me, but you walked away when I cried
You said you would hold my hand, but you left me to fall
You said you would protect me, but carelessly you saw me crawl
You said you would make me happy, but you made me feel ashame
You said you would never do wrong, but you drown me in puddle of blame
Am I that insignificant my love.....?

Reviews

[Jerryyoung1z]

Wow, nice one Whisp, really nice. People make promises, but we are often disappointed. I particularly love the question at the end
''am I that insignificant my love....? Amongst all your writings so far, this is my favorite, but with the exception of ''Saviour'' that remains number 1, undisputed champion haha