Twenty Moons..

Twenty years, twenty turns,

Twenty times the light was burnt.

Twenty of your deepest fears,

Twenty times you have dream my tears.

Twenty years, twenty moons,

The darkness is our new kingdom.

Darkness brought good to terminate,

Angel of darkness fortify its faith.

Twenty wishes, twenty stars,

Seems so close, yet so far.

Twenty morose to be chosen,

Twenty screaming memories that have been frozen.

Twenty voices, twenty cries,

Twenty can see through your empty lies.

Blade strikes with broken promises,

Going through muddle, rainy life became a crisis.

Twenty graves, twenty fights,

Twenty times I saved my demise.

Claiming moon,  firing hours blind,

A unknown fear you will find.

Twenty moons, twenty years,

Now has come the day you fear...

Reviews

[ORBLE]

This is amazing! I'm in my twenties and feel like I can totally relate to your poem, especially the muddle and broken promises. Thank you for sharing :)

Just a few corrections: "twenty times you have dreamT my fears" and "aN unknown fear" (sorry!)

[Hyacinth]

Wonderful. I don't know what to say or how to describe this other than saying that it is simply wonderful. Wow.