One cut, two cut

One cut, two cuts

One cut, two cuts, three cuts, four

The blood just drips from the tub to the floor

Drag the blade across my knee

Sit back as I watch it continue to bleed

Long cuts, dirty cuts, small cuts, clean cuts

I guess I just had bad luck

Tears stream from my eyes

Stuck in the abyss no one hears my cries

Deep cuts, small cuts

Shameful tears

Falling, falling through the years

Screaming, crying voices in my head echo my fears

Five cuts, six cuts, seven cuts, eight

From every wound I'm loosing my faith

From every blood pour

My death start to grow

Nine cuts, ten

I hope your happy after my life ends

Hi cuts, bye cuts, see you later cuts!!

Reviews

[θεά]

Despite the clear smart use of phonetics and effective placement of words, as a fellow-human being I do hope you're not into self-infliction of pain.

Even if you are, I hope you're able to get past whatever is hurting you and become the person you want to be. Sorry for the sermon.

I think you'll make a very good song-writer.

Take care, and best wishes.
M.

[Beautiful_lady]

I've read this one you showed me

[TWIZTED]

Yup been there done that as well. Music, writing, and ofcourse all the bad stuff we do cause it stops the pain for a few mins. But as I aged and shared my feelings through songs, and stories I have grown out of the cutting phase. I hope you do as well. Remember Your not alone lots of us have been there and done that, or are still doing it, so please reach out to us we are here for you. Your style and honesty will open their eyes, hope ya know that. TC kiddo.

[Whisper]

Please tell me your opinions, no rude or hateful comments. Thank You!