Glamourous ?

Would you trade your soul ;
for that "good life"?
diamonds, fame , gold ,etc.
I would  knowing "everything
that glitters is not gold"
and I wouldn't turn back
I would make all the sacrifices I had to
would you chastise me ?
would you deprave me of my ethnicity ?
would you throw me out of your life ;
like trash you just swept up ?
I will not be disinclined
nor will I suffer from compunction.
I will be lost in the thrill of it all subconsciously , hun

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think you've used maybe a few too many big words in the latter half of the piece for too little an outcome, but you still have a good concept and you've elaborated on it well. I normally don't like the sort of 'questioning' theme you've used but I think it works here - comes across as very earnest. Good work.

[_w3rd]

thankyou i will work on it .