I Just

just stuck in my feelings and started writing like usual. i wrote this in literally 3 minutes.

I just want to hear what you think.

I just want to look in your eyes and feel what you say.

I just want to touch your heart like I thought you touched mine.

I just wish you realized what I said was true.

I just wish you knew that when I said I loved you I meant it.

I just wish you felt the way I did when we spent hours together.

I just wonder how you broke every wall I had built.

I just wonder how long it went on before I found out.

I just wonder why you did what you did.

I just still can’t believe how things turned out, or how I fell for the same bullshit as the rest of them.

Reviews

[Jeremia]

I think a lot of people can relate to a poem such as this. Nice job expressing how you feel .

[Timothy]

Bittersweet without the sweet, straight with more than a touch of bluntness, I liked it!

[M.M.I]

A very painful poem..I feel like you may have written this in angst. Definitely an introspective read.