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<><> Pixles <><>     Here I am  On this side again   Prone to slide again       Destitute times.        When descent is popular        Vanity as the face of          A beautiful woman              She is a tank              It would take a army              To stop her                   Painting pictures of                   Prophets  upon                      The wall                          Pixels portray the                          Devils we see                             Daily                             (All rights reserved   [email protected])

Author's Note

All imput welcome, always .

Reviews

[Rogelio Chavez]

I like the way you wrote. Something i haven't seen here at this website. good job.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Love the tone, the poetic prowess, the stairlike descension of words and the content really lights the fuse to my own righteous indignation.

Cheers!
FF

I like how it's written in fragments and the writing slants to the right. "Here I am
On this side again
Prone to slide again"
Good one.