bleeding inside out

bleeding inside out

A Poem by ||demonic_poet||

Cold...
Saddened...
Depressed...
The words that describe me, in my most opinion
The smile sets them apart
So does the actions
Happyness..
Joy...
Smiling..
They cover up the real me
The dark me
The me you will hopefully never meet
Where sun does not shine
To where no smile is cough
Underneath my smile is the real actions
But don't ask me how I am, b/c i'll just say i'm ok
But i lie, i lie alot about my emotions
When i smile i am most likely wanting to cry
When i walk high and mighty, i actualy feel that the world is pushing me lower
When i laugh i feel as if i want to die
Don't ask though if im alright, because i will lie
I would write more, if it was that i felt happy enough to even do so..

© 2008 ||demonic_poet||


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wow this was a good write. and really, this kind of "hit home" with me. This is the way i act most of the time, although the crying part would be different for me in a way. I do smile when i feel as though i want to cry even though i know that i cannot cry. For some reason, i'm barely ever to cry about something if it makes me sad. Its almost as if when im sad i just go numb and my brain tells me "You are sad." but really, this was a good write and i enjoyed reading it! thank you for sharing!

~~Ally Baker
"Dont upset the writer. They might put you in one of their books and kill you."

Posted 16 Years Ago



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hi. im aubrey banks. they call me smorz. im married to demyx and we r expecting a child. yeaaaa dont ask. im 13. i go to dms. im in the 8th grade. music is a big part of my life. i love to sing and i .. more..

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