That Guy

That guy I met on a rainy day makes me feel

Amazing

His smile to his eyes,

His laugh to his touch,

He is simply amazing

That guy is cute and tall and smart

He’s really caring

Kind of wish I met him

Around fall

That guy, his kiss is

Soft and sweet

Feels like it was meant

To be

His name is a secret to you but

Not for me, which means there’s

Something more than you can see

That guy is just so amazing

I hope this is real.

The way we stare into

Each other’s eyes is like

I know all his secrets and he knows mine

Maybe I’m falling for

Him too soon

That guy has me hypnotized

What could I possibly do?

When he holds me tight

Everything feels right

Even though it not

That guy has me under a spell

His eyes have me in the daze

But I don't know

what to do

Reviews

[Jen]

Chuckling here... The poem has a specially different charm to attract the reader, just like that guy has the charm to bewitch your soul... The poem, though not a rhyming poem, is very much based on a person's (your) struggle with fantasy and reality. Seems like How a person behaves in love is pretty much the main subject... Newcomer, you are lucky to write this. Will you please share with me, your experiences of becoming a writer????
Thank you for sharing this excellent piece of art here. Keep It Up! (y)

[Meant_to_be]

Thank you, I appreciate your feedback. Most of the poems I write have to do with how I feel about something or someone after something happens. I mostly write them when I feel sad it helps me feel better and not over think things to much.

[Jen]

You're most Welcome (y)