Look Beyond What You See

This is the first poem that I've ever published online, so it may not be that good. I wrote this when I was pretty bored.

Taunted sitting in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
Her dreams away
Through that slice
That cut
That pain
She felt no reason
To remain
Look at her
Tears upon her face
Look
Perfect sits alone
No one
Knows that she roams
With that savage blade of hers
Only hidden places,
You know
You thought she had it all
A love,
Warmth
Look
Lonely sits in solitude
Crying there,
Completely nude
You never know how beautiful
Someone is unless you
Take the time to see
Lonely is beautiful,
You know
Look
It's Cruel
Sitting there
Drowned in a pool
Of blood that surrounds him
Now his head
Completely bare
No mercy brought to him
By whom should have provided,
Safety

Reviews

[GrandDystopia]

Um...wow. For something you wrote while you was bored this contains a lot of depth, i know how taunts can drive people to the edge and it hurts, you brought that across very well. And don't worry i find a lot of what i write comes from boredom, it can be the best medicine sometimes:)
Great work!