Superman

You’ve come to save me again with
my skirt riding high, eyes glazed
speech slurred excitedly
(because I love you!)
the bite marks bruising the backs
of my thighs lose cover
and mystery and remind you
to knock his teeth out, that you're not sure you
know me, anymore

Author's Note

I'm going to change this some how some time

Reviews

[Extant]

It's humourous but saddening just a tad near the end. To love someone but to grow up and change. . .

[Brad]

our styles are simular...you're very raw and real...can feel your writes like a punch in the face

[Scott W. Martin]

Good poem. I like how I feel that I can understand the emotions behind it. Relating to it is something completely different, I think obviously, but it's a good poem. I like it.

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. very powerful and very resilient writing ... an inspiration to anyone who is reading ... we've grown up ... and we've traveled ... we'll travel further ... till we find all the peace we need ... it's just a matter of time ...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A severe and thought provoking piece, lends to the paths some of us have been made take, well done, good read.