Sometimes

Cold
She can’t be
touched, but is
touched
and blushes deep red that
her control is
his
when his fingers slip
under soft elastic
And sometimes she slips away
in that breath and
her body
becomes alien, laid out beneath his
shining eyes 

Reviews

[DrD]

Having drifted through much of your work, this one stands out t me. The sensitivity and imagry are outstanding and I had a truly enjoyable read. Thank you

[Deeper La'jik]

you killed it..one of your many masterpieces!!

and blushes deep red that
her control is
his

genius

[FJ Davis]

Mysteriously sensual.
Lovely work, _mal.

[caesarkreshen]

Sharp shift at the end. It's good to see different styles on here. Not sure how I feel about repetition. I prefer a hang.

she can't be touched, but is----- (hang)

and blushes

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. very subtle ... melodious ... magical ... and beautiful poetry ...

. no one writes like you ... that's why i keep waiting for you to post :) ...