Aware

Aware

A Poem by mackenzi_drew

stillness
every living breath
just floating
weightless
breathing freely
hearing every sound
in the silent
deep water
lungs fill with air
rejuvenating me
eyes reflect the sky
eyes reflect the trees
feeling every moment
every moment feels me
aware of motion
aware of form
aware of self
aware of dreams

© 2014 mackenzi_drew


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You really captivate the sensation of 'being in the moment'! Great piece!

Posted 9 Years Ago
Beautiful piece, it is so expressive. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


mackenzi_drew

9 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on November 24, 2014
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Tags: still, stillness, living, breath, floating, freely, hearing, sounds, sound, silent, deep, water, lungs, air, rejuvenating, me, eyes, reflect, sky, trees, feeling, moment, aware, motion, form, self

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mackenzi_drew
mackenzi_drew

Ottawa, Ontario, Canada



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Abstract/landscape painter, ukulele and guitar player, visitor of abandoned places, food lover, song/poem writer, photographer, coffee snob, museum/gallery browser, space geek, concert frequenter, lov.. more..

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