"Stagnant, Silent, Still"

Stagnant,
still water
no flow
from the river
colder than winter
harsh as whirling snow
Silent
like a deep sleep
rocky cliff
dangerously steep
Solitude; a webbed spider
cocoon of isolation
Still
is a statue
Dull
is this dead town
Tired
is a dead rose
chilled to the bone

Reviews

[Charlie McEwan]

You certainly know how to paint a vivid picture with words. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

[mackenzi_drew]

Thank you very much. I appreciate it :)