Done

I'm done,
Done trying.
I'm tired,
Tired of trying.
I’m done,
Done crying.
I’m tired,
Tired of caring.
I’m done,
Done hurting.
I’m tired,
Tired of losing.
I’m done,
Done chasing.
I’m tired,
Tired of everything.
I’m done,
I’m done and numb.....

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Such beautiful sadness.. .. but you know.. in my book, anyone who can write and display any words as finely and almost majestically as you have.. should have immense pride and delight in a fantastic skill, talent.. Sighhh/

[TragicEndings]

Reviews like these are the reason I do what I do

[emmajoy]

We all need some truth and kindess at times and I truly mean what i say up there, you write with a very precious skill. :)

[KCthelastboyscout]

Yeah this hits home.it goes directly to my heart.it feels like you just ran a marathon without running.its that tired feeling in your bones.i understand completely

[TragicEndings]

Took the words right out of my mouth !

[Adam Adams]

those feelings of frustration, hopelessness, & some juxtaposed disturbance are well smooched in ur dotted footprints of words. really liked the way how generously u capture the moments - the phase of ur current feelings in suchness of texture with... numbness. nicely inked!

[TragicEndings]

Thank youu for your review :) ! Those were current feelings I had when I wrote it, and yes.. with nothing but numbness

[Adam Adams]

and u have very well captured those feelings of ur caramelized heart in words. looking forward to your work! 🥂