Sorry

read it for yourselves

You have it in you

In your heart

It tells you what to do

It tells you what not to

It tells you how to

It tells you the right and the wrong

It tells you to express yourself

At some times it does,

At some it doesn’t

Then it tells you to listen

It makes you cry

It makes you laugh

It makes you remember those sweet times

It makes mistakes

It leads you to trouble

But you know it wasn't his fault

You always have it in you

It makes you excited

It lulls you to sleep

Ummmmmm….sorry did I say heart? I meant head,

I was talking about our brains..

Reviews

[St.Jimmy]

Clever write.....
Poem conveys that if we use more of our brains than our heart the things would be better.....
Kinda practical one
Keep writing
~Aaradhya

[Tapsi]

uh-uh
"makes you cry" huh? im sure ure writing that from the experience of others..obviously you are ...
OTHER THAN THAT- you're doing fantastic :) keep up.

[harman kour]

shreya i would never want to hear you saying poems are not your forte! It was a wonderful write... But then i cant stop relying on my heart you know! Call it my weakness if you like!
Again i enjoyed it thoroughly!!! :D

[Abhinav]

this was beautiful stuff, and from what i gather from below, your first poem?
anyways, nice work
and keep writing:)))

Abby

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes if we use our brain more. We would be in less trouble. I like this poem. Took us a polite journey to tell us to use common sense and wisdom before action. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[maryjaneuy]

you're fairly good. keep on writing. :)

[Simple_mee]

Nice one. So gal wat were u saying that u sucked at writing poems... if thats the case can u plz be kind enough to explain the ABOVE!!!