Medusa's words to Poseidon

Again written for a contest

I was beautiful

And you thought I was suitable

Now in the midst of all this pain

You've defiled not only my but my sister's names

You wrecked me beyond repair

In ways I shouldn't share

You made me a villain

Yet I used to be one in a million

You were the savage

Yet I'm the one known to do damage

Reviews

[willweb]

Short and direct and a point understood. How many people have been created by another's wicked deeds. Nicely done. I hope you won the contest

[Chris]

And THAT still happens today... go figure.

[Love-Me-Softly]

Sadly I know all too well...

[Coyote Poetry]

Medusa had reasons to be angry. I liked the directness of the words. You made the reader believe and see every word. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Love-Me-Softly]

Thank you! I wanted it to be more powerful than just "he hurt me" I wanted it to truly showcase the pain it caused. At least I would imagine it caused her a lot of pain, although I would've loved snakes that could turn men to stone with one look. lol :p

[Coyote Poetry]

It did dear poet. Medusa, was alone. And you are welcome.