Did you like your trip? Part One

When Andy got whisked away onto a distant Island he didn't know what to do. As he explores the place he meets pretty but feisty female Jenny. The pair team up to fight to get off the island.

 

 The sun rose across the blue printed sea. Waves clashed gently apron the rocks, and the palms swayed gently in the wind. Andy woke up from his sleep, facing the bright blue sky, with no sign of clouds to be seen. He didn't recognize the area, it was as if he'd woke up in a dream and never been able to go back to present day. He sat up, rubbed his hands over his face. And thought. 

  Sand covered the ground, with the wind blowing it across into the nearby bushes. Andy stood up, stretched his back, and started walking. Around and around, down to the water and back up onto the hill side. When he came across a much darker place of the island. 

  It was a dark forest, tropical as it looked. Andy could hear the sounds of roars and monkey cries. But that didn't scare him. He wanted to figure out a way to get off this island. He wanted to go home. 

  He started to crush the bushes as he walked into the dark and gloomy forest. It must have been so dark as the tall trees were trapping all sunlight. It was dark, but Andy kept on walking. Around the different trees, over the spiky brambles. Till he found a small hut made out of logs and straw. He took a deep breath, and went to walk inside.

  In the hut was a lit fire, a rug made out of animal fur. And some type of marking on the walls. Andy could smell something good cooking. In fact it  smelt so good that he followed the smell. But something was about to stop his temptation. As he went to go into the next room, something touched his shoulder. Andy turned round, and screamed.

Author's Note

Hope u enjoyed part one guys. Part two will be working on soon.

Reviews

[Blake]

This was fairly good. You just need to work on grammar and descriptions of things. It was a little bit confusing, but maybe you'll clear it all up in Part Two? Good job.