One-Winged Angel

Just a little something I wrote...

Don't cry, my one-winged angel

Someday I know you'll fly

Have hope, my one-winged angel

And you'll fly high on your broken wings

You're my one-winged angel

Everyday I watch you try

You, my one-winged angel

Always trying hard to soar above

Keep trying, my one-winged angel

One day you'll be a dove

Fly high, little angel

Fly on your broken wings

You know that with your hope

And a little fairy dust,

Love will set you free

Don't cry, my one-winged angel

Someday I know you'll fly

Have hope, my one-winged angel

Let your tears float to the sky

And fly, fly, high

Fly high on your broken wings

Fly, my one-winged angel

Fly up,

Fly high,

Fly far far away

Author's Note

Is this more of a poem or a song?

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

It is more of both, kind of a mixture. Just let me say, this was absolutely gorgeous! The poem itself gave me the impression of a mother and child. Allowing her only child or first born leave her arms to grow up. It was so lovely. And it is just ravishing! Favorite line, "Let your tears float to the sky, and fly, fly high. Fly on your broken wings." Oooh, gives me shivers. Really love this. Absolutely, seriously!

[The Adventure]

Sounds like a song to me... but without rhyme.

[Carrie Manor]

It could be either a poem or a song, but either way it's a lovely piece of art. It really provoked my pity for the poor angel

[Judy Ponceby]

With the repeating phrase it feels more like a song. A lovely heartfelt song. :)