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Blue, Blue Eyes

Blue, Blue Eyes

A Poem by Zune
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Blue eyes

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Blue, blue eyes,
Frosty and cold.
Blue, blue eyes,
Warm and old.
Blue, blue eyes,
Deep and light.
Blue, blue eyes,
Like stars in the night.
Blue, blue eyes,
Clear as day.
Blue, blue eyes,
They take my breath away.

© 2013 Zune


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In a few short lines you have managed to capture the ability of eyes to express themselves in so many different ways. Well written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Why am I thinking of Ian Somerhalder...lol. Very nicely penned:)

Lisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


it's true that the eyes are all things....it is also true that they cannot lie......Nice poem, the comedian in me hopes that you weren't gazing into a mirror when you wrote this......Only joking, Can't help it....Really was a gentle and warm write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Zune

11 Years Ago

Haha. No, I have hazel eyes, not pretty blue ones. Thanks for the review!
short and sweet! and amazing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zune

11 Years Ago

Thank you! It is much appreciated.

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Added on August 9, 2013
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Zune
Zune

Prescott, AZ



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Hia! My name is Zune, I love to write. I write about a lot of things, some of my pieces do talk about self harm. If you don't like that, then thats fine. Feel free to check out my other poems to. I wi.. more..

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