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I think about what you said,

If things had gone the way you thought

They should have,

The way I thought

They would have.

Would there be all

These scars and marks?

Lines upon my sides that write out

The history of a broken heart?

Would you have ripped me from

My innocence,

When I was weak

And easy prey?

Or would you have

Gotten down by my side

And worked to build me

Back up every day?

Reviews

[Créatif Word]

Nice poem, makes me want to hold your hand and pull you into a brighter, warm spot.

[Zune]

Thank you! I am glad that you liked it!

[FateDictates]

nice strong poem..simple and stylish

[Zune]

Thank you very much!