It Hurts

Going through that need of being free

Developing hatred for the loved ones to me

Reacting in a way too harsh

I am an isolated star

My qualities no longer matter

I am on the edge of being shatter

It hurts still I have to smile

In my throat there’s a bile

My eyes are damp

Emotions too clamp

But I still don’t know how to say

It hurts so bad today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Rahul]

"My eyes are damp
Emotions too clamp..."

these line're dramatically way captivating.

sometimes... we all pass through some kinda bizzares' of life in the name of "disgust" that make us all feel so... "shattered"... into the meandering of emotions. and here i guess, us writers are very blessed for "being a writer" cos.. at least, we may convey, reveal, and can transmute our emotions, feelings and everything in words... by capturing moments into memories of "urgh". nice imagery here. you got a way to flirt with words. and i like it! have at it.

[Zulfa1994]

Thankyou so much Rahul! And yes we all have those bizzare moments and this poem depicts one of those times to me. And i appreciate your words as well.

[Rahul]

yeah, i could vividly see even watch that all off the very rib of your poetry. and you know what, i really envy such moments when even me too have to trudge through such worse scenarios of life. urgh... it sucks, perhaps, in real, these are the real moments of life that help us growing better in life. (and i learned it with time even still learning, which means, i still making mistakes. lol)