A Fallen Angel

This poem talks about a fallen angel who has lost her wings and her memory and has been banished from Heaven.

Dark night,

Lightning strike,

Rain, full of fright,

In the center she stood,

Ground so wide.

The broken beauty,

With all her nudity,

Gorgeous, delicate and so small, 

She was different from all.

No memory,

No identity,

Trying to recall,

She was going crazy.

Dark night,

Lightning strike,

Rain, full of fright.

Suddenly, the storm of memory,

Came tumbling to her mind.

Touching her back so fine,

She found the wounded flesh lines.

Right at her shoulder blade,

Marred the scars that wont fade.

Realization dawned,

With a pang of heartache so strong,

Tears stung her eyes,

And the lightning struck so bright.

She wanted to shout,

She wanted to fight,

But there was no hope worth a dime.

She knew she couldn't go back to her life.

She wasn't an angel anymore,

Her wings, 

Burned and broken,

She was a Fallen,

Banished from Heaven,

And thrown in the world of full of foe.

Reviews

[Rahul]

nicely depicted.
here you, somehow, remind me of the movie called "maleficent".

very cleverly written. the choice of words's quite rhythmic, & uplifting. storyline's deep. looked more like a song. looking forward to reading your poetic-stories or rhythmic songs.

[Zulfa1994]

Thankyou again, for your encouraging words. will surely come up with new pieces.

[Rahul]

would be awaiting for reading 'em all, then. good luck.