Stop and Stare

It's on the basis of the song Stop and stare by OneRepublic...kinda^^ it's dedicated to the one my heart beats for...but i kinda don't knopw if he's the one because a palm reader (mentioned as "she" in the text) said something about meeting my love somewh

Stop and Stare
I think I'm moving but I go nowhere
It's just you that keeps me from breathing air
but she said that it will never be
so how do you explain the beating heart in me

Stop and Stare
it's time to wonder why I'm here and you there
not beside me on a rainy day
when i'm trembling in such a way
because the thunder just won't seem to make way

Stop and Stare
now it's you that throws a smile in the air
and i wonder if it's meant to be there
where i stand with the words in my head
going crazy about what she said

Reviews

[Kelsy]

I'll love to get answers for these questions.Love this!

[Distant horizons]

Hmm, life is such a puzzle, isnt it? full of questions with too few answers. again, great flow in this and wonderfully expressed.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. The format was very good. The question were very good in the poem. Did you ever get answers?
Coyote

[Alisa_the_fluff_ball]

Very pretty, I like the lyrics incorperated in this. Good job.

--Alisa_the_fluff_ball