Structure / Stale

Structure / Stale

A Poem by ASandyRabbit
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At times I feel there isn’t a structure, nor order to living
When should I wake? work? I wrack my brain raw, writing
Any task is now a challenge I struggle to complete
So I procrastinate, do it later and cut sleep
All to the back burner, roll call’s over
Eyelids are heavy, talk to my lover

Ask any student, Uni is lonely
If you try being friendly
Anyone can find love
Or probably not
Lovers get
Stale
Lovers get
Or probably not
Anyone can find love
If you try being friendly
Ask any student, Uni is lonely

Eyelids are heavy, talk to my lover
All to the back burner, roll call’s over
So I procrastinate, do it later and cut sleep
Any task is now a challenge I struggle to complete
When should I wake? work? I wrack my brain raw, writing
At times I feel there isn’t a structure, nor order to living

© 2016 ASandyRabbit


Author's Note

ASandyRabbit
Experimenting with the structure of poems; the rhyme structure is mostly AABBCCDD, the number of words go 12, 11, 10, 9, 8..., and the number of characters go 60, 55, 50, 45, 40...

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Added on November 3, 2016
Last Updated on November 3, 2016
Tags: ASandyRabbit, Love, University, Adulthood, Structure, Chaos

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I'm a young experimental writer still in that phase of everything I write is bad, but I want to improve. Please give me feedback. Tear me to shreds, in fact. I'll be able to improve from it :) I've.. more..

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