Killer

Why not?

Everybody is doing it.

I'm just like you,

See?

I only killed a man.

I killed him

because he killed me

inside.

We're all murders

of one kind or another.

You'll say that's not true.

You know it is.

Think.

Ever made someone feel bad?

You killed a little part of them.

Do you see?

Do you get it?

You murder.

You're just like me.

Reviews

[Salar Majak]

nice one, gothic, has a mixof irony and darkness, it's nice, keep writting

[Alexa Tasch]

Thanks!

[Dylan Evans]

Oooh chilling. Very poignant and dark. I got chills from reading it.
Great little peom

[Alexa Tasch]

Thank you!

[Taji Herbert]

This is a forward take on getting people to see the other side! the rhetorical questions are a slap in the face for the readers and demands attention. i like the new take!

[Julie Beth]

um wow okay remember happy things haha awesome job :)

[Jesse Jacques]

murder-murderer and other than that, no spelling or grammar mistakes. and it is kind of true. everyone has made fun of someone atleast once before. it probably does kill a little bit of the inside of a person when you make fun of them.

[Matthew Kult]

Great write

Matt.

[L. Catherine]

Dark, but once you think about it, very true. Great job! :)

[Grace Catherine C.]

Deep, man, I like it.