Invisible Storm

Anger is an invisible storm

The quiet hills felt the breeze

That slew the birds and killed the trees

The people continued as they pleased

Ignorant as they danger increased

 

And over the horizon came the invisible storm

Of thunder clouds that took the form

Of sunny skies bright and warm

No one saw the invisible storm

 

Thunder didn't sound in the sky

Lightning didn't blink an eye

God watched as the storm passed by

And let all the guilty people die

 

Acid rain came pelting down

Drowning everyone in the town 

The wind shattered the golden crown

Until the rivers ran red and brown

 

The royals gone without complaint

With death of every sinner, every saint

The invisible storm grew more faint

And left the town desolate and quaint

Author's Note

just found this and was working on it. Must have been pretty pissed when I wrote it

Reviews

[Tony Larkin]

I loved how you made the word at the end of every line rhyme in each stanza. I try to to that sometimes, but the message gets lost and it doesn't flow as well. Yours flowed very well and the message was clear and amazing. It is a beautiful poem (is it pattern for you to writer really great poetry when you're angry?)

[Chris D.]

Well then you should get angry more often..;) Loved it!!

[Relic]

An entertaining read for me. I like it. :)

[Alexa Tasch]

why thank you!

[Project Mayhem]

Hits home for me. You're flow is very good and the writing in general is very well done too

[Alexa Tasch]

aw thank you!

[Pragya Vishnoi]

Wonderful.You surely have talent for poetry.

[Alexa Tasch]

Thank you!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Great writing! Wow.....I need to drink what you drink then.....:)......no seriously, sometimes when I get into a serious introspective mood, nothing calms me down until I have penned down what was stuck in my soul....

[Jamestown]

This is so well written and imagery is off the hook, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Alexa Tasch]

Thank you!!

[GreenEyedPoet]

This is such a visual poem! All I can say is wow lol.

[Alexa Tasch]

I totally forgot about this one! I'm glad you like it!! :)

[K.G]

Sounded like the storm that had passed by my a few weaks ago xD hi! I'm alive! Srry for not being around

[Alexa Tasch]

That's alright I haven't been around much either

[K.G]

XD Well, at least we know no one didn't kidnapp u xD