Her World: Destroyed

When the most important parts of the world fall away

She’s standing on the world’s wide edge

Grey remains crumbling down

Half the world’s been ripped away

Leaving not a sound

 

The daring girl is standing there

Staring into black

With half her world gone away

She wonders if it’s worth going back

 

The rest of all the world is grey

The color bled like Earth’s blood

And every survivor’s tears

Could far outshine Noah’s flood

 

She has no home to go to

No family or friends to care

So she’ll stand on the edge here forever

And into the darkness she’ll stare

Author's Note

i was feeling down :( Review if you'd please !

Reviews

[Castonovia]

Very dark with such bleak yet oh so vivid descriptions... well penned indeed :)

[Amber Tasch]

I don't know why you tell me you can't write because this is really good and i'm sorry that i'm just reviewing it now. It uses very good imagery and flows amazingly

[RachelReaper]

I'M ON THE EDGE! OF GLORY!... Sorry, I had a lady gaga moment when I read the last two lines. Good poem, it clearly expresses your emotion at the time and has a unique concept of staring on the edge of the world.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Woah, this is awesome. Very haunting, I really liked it.

[Dr. Wood ?]

Bleak and brilliant

[Alexa Tasch]

Thank you!

[Captivating Ink]

The flow of this is simply magnificent.

[Alexa Tasch]

Thank you very much!