Im the girl your mom warned you about

Some girls should come with a warning label on them :)

I’m going around stealing hearts,

Because my heart was broken abruptly.

 

I collect these sad, damaged, barely beating hearts,

Because he has mine in the palm of his hand still.

 

I’ll play your pitiful pathetic emotions like chess,

Because he played mine oh to well.

 

I’ll chew you and spit you out like raw food

because he used me and left me mangled

 

I dance around the truths of my love to you

Because he knew far too well that the truth is to cliché 

 

I’ll look into your eyes and swear we’re true

Because he eyes held a disguise of white lies

 

I’ll rip your heart out in a thousand pieces

Because he thought 2 pieces wasn’t enough

Author's Note

Was inspired by a song to write this , Also needs to write more

Reviews

[KillerWithWords]

Fantastic. The content here is raw and perfectly unseasoned.
"I’ll rip your heart out in a thousand pieces
Because he thought 2 pieces wasn’t enough"
This last line is a little discerning.
Because your character is taking part of the very cycle that destroyed her....

[V.J.C.]

A lot of emotion can be felt in this poem. You have written something very relateable due to the sad fact that this happens all too much. Thank you for the read.

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very emotional and desperation flows in it, and i just like the way you expressed your feelings, i mean that i like your style :P.. But it was very fun to read and easy to follow. Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[ThIsDaRkRoAdToNoWhErE]

NICEEE!!! F**k yes, this was good!! Totally awesome here hun, i can totally relate to it! Nice job!! :D

[eeoopig]

Good job. This is so pain filled - I like it :) what were you listening to when you wrote this ? :D well done

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I love this. There is so much pain in this...it's fantastic. Great work!

[Rhea752]

that's so painful. i loved the poem and you should tell us the song that inspired you. great write. keep it up.