What did i do wrong?

You’ve hurt me                                  wouldn’t be the first

Abandoned me   

                            Its not like i needed you                                     

Ignored me     

  let my mind wander to far out truths

Denied me                         

        stoped me from loving you longer 

 

You say you still love me

Want to rebuild our relationship

Want to apart of my life

Care for me again

Im the sorry sucker

I keep taking you back

People say “He’s the f*****g worse“

I don’t wanna believe it but you keeping leaving

 

I want to have you  love me again

And actually hug me when the pain is to much

Hold me when i cant hold back the tears anymore

Tell me everything will be ok, when its not

 

Daddy what have I done wrong,

For you to do this?

Author's Note

First stanza got fucked up, sorry

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

You conveyed your emotions nicely and I'm a sucker for weird formats. xx

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe, this was depressing. I can feel.the abandonment within each line. It grew sadder and sadder as I read on. I loved the emotions within this piece. Good write. Thanks for sharing.

[Death Stalker]

left me speechless... good job :)

[xSamilynnx]

its really good.... lots of emotin in all of it... good flow too... good to have ya back friend ^__^