Love you, Hate your girlfriend

Love you, Hate your girlfriend

A Poem by Perfect Mistake

It hurts hearing you talk of her. 

How you spawn over every aspect of her motives.

I wanna blast music in my ears and never hear the inflation in your voice. 

 

I've been with you the whole time.

Seen all those girls who broke your heart. 

 

Your perfection attracts the w****s,

Your kindness ignites their desperation. 

 

You fall for their lies.

Your in bliss until her diguise fades.

Your hurt and say you'll never do that again. 

 

Theres not kind way to say this but

I love you, Hate your girlfriends.

 

These girls are like hookers,

And your heart is their money.

 

Your after true everlasting love

They want a fling or

Just to make their ex jealous.

 

 

© 2012 Perfect Mistake


Author's Note

Perfect Mistake
hmmm need to add more

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I can relate so much to this. It's well written and relatable win win. Love this piece thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like it. I can relate. its really good hun! Good job. very emotional

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it! I think that if you add more it would be better but its still gret the way it is. And this poem is VERY relateable

Posted 12 Years Ago


Indeed this is very good, I can sense the desperation and anger in this poem, which is good :)

and yeah, I feel like something's missing, but nonetheless, keep at it :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Max
it doesnt rhyme which is a personal ocd thhing. overall though good.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it....I really don't think you need to add anything.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is good. Really good. Keep it as is. I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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